Take a hike, I told you.
You brought me wild flowers.
Go fly a kite.
Your heart replied with paper, sticks and string.
I said no so many times.
But you showed me.
That wasn’t what I meant.
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2014/02/trifextra-week-103.html
The Word Pirate 
Lovely lovely lovely. Great write and congrats on that well-deserved win.
This has such a sweet feel to it, Valerie. I love the literal minded listener. And the reluctant open heart of the narrator.
Valerie, the form of your writing is just as beautiful as the words you select to tell your stories. Lovely writing. Lovely. Hugs.
Loved the way this developed Valerie. Sometimes you’ve just got to persevere and not take no for an answer.
Ah, but to see she realized in the end made his task worth the while. I love your idea of love, Valerie.
Very sweet! One of the few! Well done. 🙂
Ah, you old softie!!! Love how he showed rather than told. < 3
This post has a nice romantic touch I like.
I really love this poem! I’ve shared it on my Google + page. Thank you for making me feel something hopeful with your words this evening.
Allison Katelyn @ http://SimpleSilverLinings.blogspot.com
Great writing 🙂
This one left with me a big smile. Well done:~)
Very cleverly done 🙂
So beautiful….to be pursued so…to be so sure of it..
Great choice of words,
great take on the prompt
Shiver me timbers 😉
Ally 🙂
Oh, I loved this! Such a sweet, romantic piece.
Very romantic and well written. Congratualtions on your win.
Lovely and romantic, Valerie. Great take as always dear.
Sweet and lovely.